英语作文-我的一天 my day

My day is like this: I get up at 7, because today is Sunday, December 6, 2009. I put on my clothes, and I finished my homework. I looked at my watch! 12 points already! I want to play computer, but it's time for lunch. I should have lunch.
After lunch, I went to play computer. Played for a whole 3 hours. I looked at my watch again, and it was 3:30 pm. Right. My little brother, Zhang Fan, came back from my grandma's house. I'm so glad to get off the computer quickly to meet my brother Zhang. Now I played with my brother. Has been playing for 1 hours, needless to say, has been 4:30. I watched the show on TV with my brother, and I saw 1 hours. We ate our meals, played computer games, and went to sleep.
Ah! This day is really happy!

我的一天是这样的：我7点起床，因为今天2009年12月6日 星期日。我穿好衣服，吃完了饭，做完了作业之后，我看了看表，呀！已经中午12点了！我想玩玩电脑，可是到午餐时间了，我该吃午餐了。
吃完了午餐，我就去玩电脑。玩了整整3个小时。我再看了看表，已经下午3：30了。正好，我的弟弟张凡从姥姥家回来了。我高兴得迅速关闭电脑去迎接我弟弟张凡。这会儿我又和我弟弟玩了起来。一直玩了1个小时，不用说，已经4：30了。我又和我弟弟看了看电视上的节目，又看了1个小时。我们吃完了饭，玩了玩电脑，就睡觉了
啊！这一天过的真愉快呀！