托福写作三连环 助你写作得高分(3)

本段从 “rose”（起床）写起，然后是吃早餐（“not to miss breakfast”， “closing at nine o‘clock”），然后是 “close to noon”，一直写到这一天结束（“By nine”）。

B. 按位置远近排列（spatial arrangement）。例如：

From a distance， it looked like a skinny tube， but as we got closer， we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular， all right， but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore， we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts： a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten feet away， we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass， unlike the tube that it was sitting on， which only had four. Inside， the tube was gloomy， because of the lack of light. Then a steep， narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land.

本段的写法是由远及近，从远处（“from a distance”）写起，然后“get closer”，再到（“ten feet away”），最后是 “inside the pagoda”……当然，按位置远近来写不等于都是由远及近。根据需要，也可以由近及远，由表及里等等。

以上就是托福写作中段落内容的安排，要注意的是句子的排列顺序必须合乎逻辑，从一个句子到另一个句子的过渡必须流畅，要有连贯性，不能左一句右一句企图以难词多取胜，或者用些复杂句型，一篇好文章的基础，就是文章段落安排的让人觉得舒服合理。