Persons in the Labor Force

2026-02-06
「要求」

  上表展示了1830年到1970年农业劳动力和非农业劳动力比例的变化。请根据此柱状图写一篇短文。要点如下:

  两者的变化呈反比,即随着非农业劳动力的增加,农业劳动力在减少,并且这种增加和减少的趋势,在1830年到1970年间是一直持续的。

  1870年农业劳动力和非农业业劳动力的比例基本持平。1970年大约95%的劳动力是非农业人口。1890年农业劳动力和非农业劳动力的比例为7∶3,而到了1910年,两者的比例正好掉了个,为3∶7.1830年,70%的劳动力为相对较少的人口提供粮食,但到了1970年,5%的劳动力则要为相对大量的人口提供粮食。

  「范文」

  Persons in the Labor Force

  This table shows the changing proportion of farm and non-farm workers in the labor force from 1830 to 1970. The change is inverse; that is ,as the size of the non -farm labor force increases, the sizes of the farm and non-farm occupation are consistent through the years.

  The proportion of farm and non-farm workers was about equal in 1870. About 95 percent of the labor force were non-farmers in 1970. The proportion of 70 percent of farmers and 30 percent non-farmers in 1830 was exactly reversed in 1910. In 1830, 70 percent of the labor force was required to feed a relatively small population, whereas in 1970, only 5 percent of the labor force was required to feed a large population.

  「评语」

  该文分为两段,首段叙述了农业劳动力和非农业劳动力总的变化趋势;而第二段对表中的几个特殊点进行了说明。从一般到具体,结构简单清晰。首段的“inverse”和二段的“reverse”用得恰当精练,为文章省了不少笔墨。“farm workers, non-farm workers”,“farm labor force, non-farmlabor force ”“farm occupation, nor-farm occupation”及“farmers, non-farmers”几组同义词的运用,避免了重复,使文章呈现出变化。